Good boy for sharing your writing on your blog Emmanuel. I really like how you used adjectives to help us to imagine what your rainbow looks like. You also used your full stops very well. What do you think it would feel like to slide down a giant rainbow?
Good boy for sharing your writing on your blog Emmanuel. I really like how you used adjectives to help us to imagine what your rainbow looks like. You also used your full stops very well. What do you think it would feel like to slide down a giant rainbow?
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